Mascara Favorite

 

There are two types of mascara that I like to use from two different brands. First is the mascara of Maybelline "the magnum barbie" This claim is Maybelline The Magnum Barbie Mascara gives feathers like eyelashes with an extreme length. It is waterproof from the Black Formula feature enriched with collagen with a comb stick that separates and defines each lash. Get thick eyelashes look dramatically up to 10x more volume. After I bought the price of RP. 91.000 and try it at home, it is indeed this works well as the claim, which makes my eyelashes look more tapering and lengthening lashes. So far I am very satisfied with the results and i guess this one is perfect for me .

second, included in the local brand of QL cosmetics. The claim is waterproof and curling. Honestly, this mascara is not very waterproof like the claim listed, because when washed wudhu fit, giving the effect of falling black grains but not smudge. For the second claim is curling, I like the curling results that make my eyelashes look longer and flickering, so it does not disappoint with an affordable price of RP. 45,000. every brand there are disadvantages and advantages, but the two brands that i often use for everyday activities outside.

That's the mascara review I use everyday, hopefully can help you choose the product mascara that you want. Thank you...

TEXT EDITING

The editing process is very important in the writing of scientific papers. Editing is an activity of preparing the manuscript and so on to be circulated or published in printed form by paying attention to its presentation. So, it is important to be discussed. The definition of Text editing is the ability to change text by adding, deleting, and rearranging letters, words, sentences and paragraphs. Text editing is the main operation users perform in word processors, which typically also handle graphics and other multimedia files.

 

Someone who does editing is called an editor. Editor serves the project, author, and the reader. The editor balances the author's passion with published standards and reader expectations - and finds ways to produce a story to fit all three. The editor is an enhancer. They work to make what is better good, what is great, amazing. They challenge the writer. They challenge themselves. There are important things that editors need to keep in mind when editing a text, as the editor should do and should not be; an editor’s job is to make a story, article, or manuscript better. Better in terms of clarity, enjoyment, logic, flow, and meaning. Better in terms of meeting the needs of the audience. 

 

Specific dos of text editing. First, You should Improved Spelling and Grammar. This is done if there is a sentence that is wrong grammatically, then it has become the right editor to fix it. Second, Removing Words or Content that Violates Norms of Decency or SARA.
As an editor, they are required by the editor's sensibility and wisdom to decide whether a content is worthy or not read by the crowd. Third, fixing Content that does not match Facts. In this case the editor is required to have extensive general knowledge in order to be able to correct the information or information that has been mentioned by the author is correct. that's why editors should often googling and have extensive knowledge.

 

Specific Don’ts of text editing. First, Changing Writer Style. Writing style (let alone fiction) is something that is personal, unique, and peculiar to the author, therefore he cannot be changed. Second, adding Scripts. An editor might have advised the author to have his story added. The communication between editors - the author is vital, editors can not add stories without author's permission. Third, changing the Script Without the Author's Authorship. The editor should not change the script manually. The editor also should not be knowledgeable by saying how the story should be and changed without communication with the author. Fourth, distributing Related Information Book Content Before Rising. Related to the secrecy of the issuer's property in which an unpublished manuscript is a "corporate secret." Fifth, Be Knowable. Anything that he doubts and does not know, must be checked first or consulted first.

Video Education - Simple present tense

 We made this video to fulfill our soft skill task, we hope this video can increase your knowledge.

created by:
1. Eka Desmawati
2. Retno puji lestari

 https://youtu.be/1ImAi-nuGmw

softskill: PEMBELAJAR B.ING BERBANTUAN KOMPUTER

Source Text:

Di adat Jawa, ketika sang pengantin wanita telah selesai melakukan siraman, biasanya si orang tua pihak wanita melakukan tradisi Dodolan Dawet.

Ceritanya, si orang tua pihak wanita sedang woro-woro ke tetangga bahwa mereka tengah mantu dan menghidangkan minuman dawet. Bentuk dawet yang bulat-bulat juga bermakna bahwa si orang tua sudah memiliki tekad bulat untuk menikahkan anaknya. ‘Mata uang’ yang digunakan untuk transaksi jual beli dawet adalah bulatan kreweng, yaitu sebuah bentuk tembikar yang mirip dengan uang logam. Makna dari mata uang kreweng adalah pada dasarnya manusia berasal dari bumi.

Di adat Betawi, Bukan sekedar roti yang terasa enak di lidah. Roti Buaya bagi pernikahan khas Betawi punya sarat mendalam tentang kesetiaan.

Roti buaya bermakna kesetiaan yang akan dialami oleh pasangan mempelai pada adat Betawi. Konon, masyarakat Betawi percaya bahwa buaya hanya memiliki satu pasangan sepanjang hidupnya. Kepercayaan inilah yang melatar-belakangi budaya pemberian roti buaya ketika pelaksanaan pernikahan. Selain itu, roti buaya juga dijadikan souvenir bagi anggota keluarga yang belum menikah dengan harapan segera mendapatkan jodohnya. (1 year ago By Andhika Lady Maharsi).

Target text using google translate:

In Javanese custom, when the bride has finished doing the splash, usually the woman's parent does the Dodolan Dawet tradition.

The story, the parents of the women are woro-woro to the neighbors that they are mantu and serve dawet drinks. The rounded form of dawet also means that the parent already has a determination to marry off his son. The 'currency' used for buying and selling dawet is kreweng sphere, which is a form of pottery similar to a coin. The meaning of kreweng currency is basically humans derived from the earth.

In Betawi custom, not just bread that tastes good on the tongue. Crocodile Bread for a typical Betawi wedding has a deep loyalty about loyalty.

Bread crocodile means loyalty that will be experienced by the couple on the Betawi customs. It is said that the Betawi people believe that the crocodile has only one partner throughout his life. It is this belief that underlies the culture of baking crocodiles during the marriage. In addition, crocodile bread is also used as a souvenir for family members who are not married with the hope of getting his soul mate immediately.

Words analysis:

siraman:

This word has no changed after translated via google, it is because siraman means a traditional ceremony in Javanese custom. So, google translate did not understand what siraman means if the word changing with English version.

Dodolan dawet:

This word is not translated by google, because dodolan dawet is Javanese tradition in wedding ceremony. Which is, google can not find what dodolan dawet means.

Woro-woro :

This word has not changed after translated via google, because woro-woro is Javanese languange and that means is “pengumuman” in Bahasa or “announcement” in English. this language is only used as everyday language in Java society.

Kreweng:

This word cannot translate into English, because kreweng is Javanese language or local language and that means is broken pitcher which made of clay. Kreweng has a purpose to remind us that humans come from the earth.

Roti Buaya:

Roti buaya after translated with google translate is “crocodile breads” this word can be translated into English because it is not local language, but general word. however, if we are asking to the native speakers he or she did not understand what is “ crocodile breads”.